Huff Puff

Wow...just wow. This is really good and the only thing I could find.."not particularly appealing" to me was this: I try to go faster but my legs will not go ...

Woow! All I can say is..AMAZING! You really captured it all so well, it made me feel I was right there but unable to comfort the character. Keep it up! ...

I urgently require a general summary of the novel "To kill a mockingbird" by Harper Lee. This has to be a first hand summary by those who have indeed read ...

Hello, Huff Puff here to review you :) I'm not going to review your grammar or spelling 'cause I don't have the patience :P Your beginning was quite effective with ...

Great job! You really captured the feelings of this character which aroused my pity & sympathy. Well done. x

Review on your edited version: The edited version was in many ways better than the original. You gave more life, more feeling and more thoughts to your character which I ...

Hello! First of all: I carry all my burdens, my omens and my sins. They are always on me. They are my possessions of all things. I found myself coming ...

Hahaha you can call me hufflepuff then xD I posted a link before ur reply where Ive posted my new piece. Your comment & review would be much appreciated (Y)

Im just going to outline the important things I noticed here. This mistake stands out a lot in this story. You seem to be changing your character from first person ...

Hello Sam! Welcome to YWS - here we're all family =) Post your work and I'll all definitely review it :) x

Hello peeps ^^ Thank you for commenting. sargsauce, Thanks for explaining :) I'm going to start editing this version soon and notify you when it's complete. Thanks a lot for ...

Hey! I hope Im not too late..i guess i am cause this was written in 2009. But Id like to answer your questions and if you've already have them answered, ...

HAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHHHAA This is HILARIOUSSS! Not such a big fan of Meyer and not at all of Bella! Looved it! :) x

A very touching story indeed! The title acts quite effectively too and it was the title that made me read this piece. The last line is undoubtedly my favourite :) ...

I really liked the way you began this: I’ve always thought of what touching a cloud would be like It implies innocence, the thinking of a child who hasn't faced ...